The hidden sweeps
The clock runs lean
The faster they run
Fueled by ignorance
To choke their own
To Survive
Angels alight, morning fire
The break of dawn will mark
The final circle
Will we perish this time
Or left alone in this
Self destructive dance
To live
To breathe
To sin
Do you really move
As what I see
Nothing ever changes
Never at peace
Do you really bleed
For all that you do
Comes back to you
Never will be
- Caes
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OVERSEAS COMMENT!!
Hiya! :D
Okay, so what's your interpretation of your poem? :) To me, it's a different view of life.
Love,
Aishwarya
PS: How are YOU?
Like I said earlier last week, it was brilliant. The theory of evolution and where it's headed! BEA-U-TI-FUL!
Funny you signed it as 'Caes'
Sarah : Tis a pen name I've been using, reasons are withheld.
Aishwarya : Its based on a theory really, but I don't want to get into that, I'd rather people formed their own interpretations, hope you're doing well , thanks for the email too hun.
I like it :).
I like ur pen name too!
you should write more often..or post them HERE more often.
I miss u D :(.
Dear Dee,
I'm not sure if I actually expected you to give me your interpretation...I know how fond you are of promoting individuality et al! ;)
I'm doing great, UCLA totally rocks, miss you and home.
Reply sometime!
Love always,
Anita
PS: Love you Sarah, and you too Jan. Have a good summer, all!
its an amazing poem.......dayaan......keep it up man......amazing words n feelings embedded in it..... a person reading it can feel it.....
Hey droogs,
Sorry about the downtime, I had this poem tucked away somewhere and I thought I'd use it as a filler, really do appreciate the reviews though, I thought I'd put down my interpretation ,
How is it possible how humans continue to co-exist with each other when we're inclined towards destruction and self degradation, (think wars,9/11,homicides/genocides/suicides and that sect of people who think cutting their wrists is cool)
Nowadays humans overexemplify and dramatize their life with little occurances that make them feel like they're really 'going through some shit'.
How long can we continue to exist? (self destructive dance).
Lets talk more 'evolution', with the way things are going, I believe that its all in a cycle, we rise above as kings,are corrupted,kill ourselves and are thus reborn, the universe in my eyes , will always follow this pattern , right now we're following corruption and its evident everywhere.
How do we not recognize this effect ?, this process in motion ?,
Simple, our minds 'evolve' in a way that our psyche suppresses it instantly and labels it as 'crazy talk',
I have various reasons that I think fuel this process, those I will withhold because I don't want to appear as blasphemous or hurt anyone's feelings here,
Thanks for reading :), cheers and goodnight.
Hey Guys!!
Hi Anita :). Sup gurl?
i realised i didnt leave my mark of existence in diz post...haww!!
hello dayaan...
hello aish...
hello sarah...
hello sun...
hello jan...
bout da post...i dunno...as usual i m confused...i wud rather not think so deep...starts gettin disturbinn...lolz....
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I'm at a public library and I think I have 2 minutes left to comment!!
HIII YOU GUYS!! I love you!! 2 minutes, okay, less...
Dee, thanks for that interpretation, that was Uber-cool and I need to re-read the poem when I'm not afraid of being logged off mid-sentence...
Btw, the cyclical self-destruction thing TOTALLY coincides with my beliefs for the apst nine years! More later...
AHHHH!!!
ME!
omg i loved it!!
Aishwarya again. New day, new re-read.
Dee, I'm interested in knowing where you get your ideas! Seriously, what you're saying sounds very much like an aspect of Raja Yoga, the meditation I've been really into for like, 9 years now.
Okay so I REALLY miss you guys. (You're going to hate me for this but...) In the words of Lonestar "Not a day goes by...that I don't think of you".
Gah. I'm such a sap. I miss all of you! I'm going to Chicago on Saturday morning, so I plan to e-mail all of you from there...is Shehara in Chicago now or LA? How are YOU?? How's the tour?
Sarah, will YOU email me with the news please? Or remind him or...something? I am so cut off here! :P
Loving complaints,
Aishwarya
PS: It feels so nice knowing you guys can pronounce that without help. :)
Hey Aishwarya!No worries, we'll keep in contact
Dayaan, what's her e-mail add?
mwahz!
Do you really bleed
For all that you do
Comes back to you
Never will be
dat has sm effect man!!!
newaz, reminds me of evolution by PJ...
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